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Just a Bunch of Sues xD by choco-muffin Just a Bunch of Sues xD by choco-muffin
So... uhm... I can explain! xD
A few weeks ago, a certain little Muffin searched trough her computer and found an old file titled "Lily's Secret". Curious as she was, Muffin clicked on it... and almost passed out immediately: The mysterious file was her very first story, which was overflown with Mary Sues and with a plot so old and clichéd it was quite painful to read (Lily finds out that she's a *dun dun dun* Fairy Princess from zhe seekrit, seekrit other world which she has to save <_<; ).
Muffin was shocked, but this shock was mixed with an odd desire to draw these characters... And this is the result.
Almost everything needed to be known is there in the picture, here are a few extra notes for the people who are interested:
Lily: The main Sue, a "typical thirteen-year old girl named Lily, sometimes called Lil' Angel, propably because of her long, blonde hair" and of course mood-ring eyes.
Mel: The sidekick-Sue, with no speshul powers at all... Awww xD
Alexandra and Sandra: Mel's sisters, but actually don't resemble her at all. Spoiled, superficial and annoying.. 'nuff said! xD
Myanve: Hippie-Fairy, Lily's new BFF, of course OMG!beautiful! , but now half as pretty and speshul as our main Sue.
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maraudeuse Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2010
Aww, I'd definetely love to read this story some day! xD This reminds me of my own first attempt to create a story... urgh, it's horrible. (The most horrible thing was that I changed the name almost everyday cause I was never content with it. In the end, it was Katherine, I suppose. And she lived with her Aunty Watsername who hated her... *sigh* And fell in love with some stupid guy that turned up in her garden some day xDDD) I'm glad I never showed it to anyone, let alone upload it on the internet. I don't think I would still be alive by now. x,D
But PLEASE - let me read it. I promise I won't laugh. :D
XylitolFairy Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2007
Hahaha XD I found my very first fanfic (A Harry Potter one) a couple of weeks ago, and almost puked |3 The heroine was such a Mary Sue and the whole story was so non-plot and shit xDDD
choco-muffin Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2007
First fanfics are always so horrible... They make you really wonder what the hell you were thinking while writing it x,DDDDD
XylitolFairy Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2007
Yeah, and how you were able to dodge those flying pitchforks from Mary Sue-haters xDDD I'm so glad that I only put out four chapters on the Internet, or else I might have been barbequed :3
choco-muffin Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2007
I'm glad I never put this one on the internet x,D (though the Inu Yasha fanfic I DID put on the internet wasn't much better than that. Well, at least there were no Sues... just canon characters being turned into Sues x,DDDDDDD Seriously, I can't decide which is worse xD).
XylitolFairy Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2007
Ugh, they're both horrible XD
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